Update

Current unedited word count: ~25.3K

Expanded some of the scenes for the trial prep. The final demo word count will probs be closer to 30k words.

After the demo is out, I’m going to finish mapping out the plot paths so I’ll be able to track what % I’ve done for each RO.

Time for bed.

 

Still Kicking

After being sick for a couple of weeks and switching into “gotta mentally prepare to cover all of my coworker’s work on top of my work for 2-3 weeks” mode, I didn’t have any creative energy left at the end of the day.

But my coworker is coming back in a week and I’ve been expanding the demo. Will Kimbles stick to this new deadline of 3-16? I sure hope so because I’m 90-95% there.

Here’s a small bit of a f!Cav scene.

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Ehud Neuhaus, Unsplashed

I already knew from experience that I could crush Cavrielle in battle without breaking a sweat. There was really no need to size up the competition. Yet, I found myself drawn to the airy sound of cheerful humming echoing through the halls.

Maybe it was curiosity. The silly knight wouldn’t be able to remember my face or voice, all thanks to Lachi’s skill in enchantment. But she was so optimistic! I was starting to believe that she couldn’t remember the humiliation of being defeated by me, the infamous Breedle the Crusher. Surely I had left a small blemish on her sunny disposition. Maybe if she opened up to her new pal Brindle, I would be able to uncover it.

Or maybe it was annoyance. After all, tricking her was the final scam I ran with Lachi. Before Lachi left…before…she betrayed me. There was no way I could accept that Cavrielle could be unscathed. Not if I wasn’t. Not after what I’d been through. There is no way that I’d be that easily forgotten.

Either way, I found Cavrielle poking around in the pantry. I leaned against the door frame, silently observing her. The knight’s face was scrunched up deep in thought as she compared the labels of two bottles of spices. Her intense contemplation didn’t seem to interfere with her humming, her fluffy orange hair bouncing as she bobbed her head a bit to the beat.

A jar of preserved peppers caught her eye.  Evidently proud of her discovery, her humming grew brighter as she returned the bottles of spices back to the shelf and reached for the jar.

I cleared my throat.

 

The Trial- Guide

I’ve been sick for a week 😦 But we got 5 days to go!

The last scene in the demo will involve the PC preparing for the trial, which is a friendly competition to prove that they are worthy of being the Mark of Jorino. During the trial, the PC will have to face both Cavriel/Cavrielle (the Other Chosen One) and Jarich/Jarrah (the Dark Rituals Inspector) in the arena to test their combat skills.

You will have a chance to train with two characters to prep for the trial. Depending on your background you may unlock a special scene:

The Ex-Militia Dancer: Engage in a dance-off with Jarich/Jarrah.

The Shadowsweeper: Marls has a special edgy present for you.

The Exiled Knight: Suna/Solaris teaches you about dangerous plants (aka which plants to grind up and blow into the eyes of your opponent)

The Grinder: Elith/Elodie teaches you some warped offensive spells

The Bardspawn: Cav baked you cookies?

The Seer: Cav’s enchanted dagger wants to be your new best friend.

Each character has a regular scene too:

Jarich/Jarrah: Combat training

Marls: Runes

Suna/Solaris: Weight training/punching trees

Elith/Elodie: Psychological warfare

Cav: Friendship!

Weekly Status Update (1-13-19)

Current Demo Word Count- ~24K/ Demo Word Count Goal- 25K- 30K

Current Status: The demo will include 11 scenes.

  • The Wanted Poster – Character Creator
  • Rescue the Ambassador!
  • Captured by Bounty Hunters
  • The Academy – The Benefactor
  • The Academy- Sometime Later
  • Dream #1 An Old Foe/An Old Friend
  • The Journey Begins
  • The Tavern
  • The Trial- Arrival
  • The Trial- Prep
  • Dream #2 A sky full of waves/ A sea full of stars

2/11 scenes completed. 7/11 scenes almost complete- need revising. 2/11 scenes need to be written. Prologue variables are complete.

Goal: All scenes written by 1/20. Revisions and beta testing done by 1/27. Demo release 2/1

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Photo by Annie Spratt on Unsplash
Updates:
  • Decorative skulls that go “ooOOOh.”
  • All romanceable characters will appear in the demo
  • Customize your scoundrel:
    • Select a name, a past alias, and a current alias
    • Choose from human, elf, orc, half-orc, half-elf, Plithodonion (Amphibious swampfolk that get a little bioluminescent when nervous) or Kovian (mountain-living folks with goat eyes and horns)
    • Choose gender and orientation
  • Create a backstory:
    • A former member of the militia with a passion for interpretative dance
    • A shadowsweeper from the forests of Lemente who was raised by shadowbeasts
    • A humble adventurer with a burning hatred for bards
    • A former thief with a knack for prophetic visions
    • A knight who was banished after failing to protect their kingdom
    • A dungeon grinder who always wanted a shot at being a mighty hero

 

Character Intros: The Other Chosen One

 

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Old Character Art

Name: Cavriel (M)/ Cavrielle (F)

Alias: Melano Lukas

Race: Human

Physical Description: Cav surely looks the part of a courageous warrior as they are a total beefcake with beautiful flowing orange hair. It’s really a shame that Cav is so clumsy. Likes to wear really shiny armor with a cool cape (although sometimes they end up tripping on the cool cape or the cape gets stuck on some branches or someone else steps on their cape by “accident”). Is almost always smiling. Tries their best. Oh man, do they always try their best.

Personality: Cav is not the sharpest brick in the shed. For what they lack in street smarts, they make up in diligence, patience, and hard work. Just wants to be everybody’s best friend and cares a lot for the people around them. Also not the best bard, but trying their hardest to improve. Cav is definitely a hopeless romantic and optimist.

Character Inspo Spotify Playlist

Likes: Their best friend Juniper (the really cool enchanted blade who talks to them), everyone that they are traveling with, DELIVERING THE SWIFT AND DECISIVE STRIKE OF JUSTICE TO THEIR FOES, TALKING LIKE THIS AND USING WORDS LIKE ‘SWIFT” AND “JUSTICE,” cookies, heroic posturing, singing, the Knights of Jorino.

Dislikes: Tripping over things, tripping over people, when the bad guy gets away, tripping over animals, walking into things, walking into people, walking into animals, weird dreams.